Everything looks good to me. I got no problems browsing the site.

Oh, and I'm using a TV as monitor, so if there's no problem on my screen, I'm kinda sure it will work perfectly anywhere else. :P

the ribbony thing covers up some of the text on this page

http://i.imgur.com/DS67kvK.jpg

I'm not saying this to be an edgy asshole, but the juxtaposition of your BIL's picture with two little lost confused girls is really bad. It looks like hes leering at them or something. Maybe use a different photo.

For me, everything is alright.

The only strange thing I saw was the space at the bottom of that page :

http://nateonguitar.com/portfolio/JATrevor/events.php

which appeared to me too big, as you can see here :

And the events on this page happened in March, so that page is unnecessary IMO ^^'

EDIT : Sorry I didn't succeed in inserting the image...

Thanks for the input guys!

Ill try to figure out these things. And yeah, i dont like his picture either, he should have me swap it out.

What do you think about the sample book?

Not bad. The banner shouldn't cover up the text, of course.

You should test on mobile browsers. In particular the behavior if you go back in mobile Safari is a bit strange. (Actually, it seems a little strange in my desktop browser too, now that I check.)

The way the text curves on the banner doesn't quite match the curve of the banner itself.

I would avoid ever exposing .php in a URL. That's leaking an implementation detail.

The text is a bit thin on the book page.

Maybe someone knows a site where I can find templates for different documents? I'm afraid of making a mistake, so I don't want to create a document from scratch.